'The pine forest fell silent...'
This picture word is so effective in creating the scene by using a metaphor. You think twice about the phrase because a pine forest can't literally 'fall silent'. It creates an eery atmosphere in your head making the text effective in creating a dark scene.
This picture word is so effective in creating the scene by using a metaphor. You think twice about the phrase because a pine forest can't literally 'fall silent'. It creates an eery atmosphere in your head making the text effective in creating a dark scene.
Examples of effective images created by words in 'A Bridge toWiseman's Cove'.
Chapter: Carl Matt, pg.284, para.1;
'Joy reached across, the warmth of her hand on his arm, a stark contrast to his own frozen flesh.'
James Moloney would have used these words to convey a deep message. Joy is full of all this love, even she's crying about Carl's mothers' death. But Carl is still in shock and doesn't feel love, he feels anger.
'..a stark contrast to his own frozen flesh' almost creates a barrier between his skin and hers, they are opposite.
The message Moloney is conveying is that you can persue change in another from giving what you know and feel.
Cahpter: A Bridge At Last, pg.270, para. 6;
'He wanted to deny it, but there was no breath inside him to force out the cry. Her words had reached round his heart and tugged the truth free, leaving himlight-headed.'
This phrase is effective because it is so realistic. You know the feeling of having no breath left in you to cry. You know the exact moment when some one is right and you have nothing left to fight for. James Moloney uses the perfect words to create this feeling inside you. Making it so effective in understanding how Car'l is feeling. The book becomes reality.
Chapter: Carl Matt, pg.284, para.1;
'Joy reached across, the warmth of her hand on his arm, a stark contrast to his own frozen flesh.'
James Moloney would have used these words to convey a deep message. Joy is full of all this love, even she's crying about Carl's mothers' death. But Carl is still in shock and doesn't feel love, he feels anger.
'..a stark contrast to his own frozen flesh' almost creates a barrier between his skin and hers, they are opposite.
The message Moloney is conveying is that you can persue change in another from giving what you know and feel.
Cahpter: A Bridge At Last, pg.270, para. 6;
'He wanted to deny it, but there was no breath inside him to force out the cry. Her words had reached round his heart and tugged the truth free, leaving himlight-headed.'
This phrase is effective because it is so realistic. You know the feeling of having no breath left in you to cry. You know the exact moment when some one is right and you have nothing left to fight for. James Moloney uses the perfect words to create this feeling inside you. Making it so effective in understanding how Car'l is feeling. The book becomes reality.